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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="http://www.englishforums.com/utility/FeedStylesheets/rss.xsl" media="screen"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Essay, Report &amp; Composition Writing</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3615.29165)</generator><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#958867</link><pubDate>Sun, 01 Nov 2009 12:19:22 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:958867</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#958867</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-958867.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi Flavia. I too am applyin to FIT for bachelors. I really like how you went about your essay..i am still in a fix on what to write in mine!</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#633025</link><pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:633025</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#633025</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-633025.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hey Flavia! Feliz Ano Novo! ...bad news-- I didnt get in...what about u? I just want to check if i did everything that was required and if i sent everything that was required also, so if u can tell me step by step what did u do to get in to FIT i would appreciate it a lot!! I will apply for the fall term and hopefully get in this time,I wont give up!! haha  thanks a lot and hope to hearfrom u soon! Sincerely, Y.</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#572383</link><pubDate>Sat, 24 Jan 2009 19:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:572383</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>2</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#572383</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-572383.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi there: This is a useful forum - thanks!  I haven&amp;#39;t received my FIT log-in yet; I applied to SUNY about a month ago.  How long did it take you both to get your FIT log-ins?  Also, when you talk about the Autobiographical Essay, are you referring to the form that appears after the SUNY application - a PDF?  Or a different FIT-specific essay?  Or are these one and the same...?  Thanks so much, and good luck,  N</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#570016</link><pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:570016</guid><dc:creator>FlaviaLima</dc:creator><slash:comments>3</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#570016</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-570016.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>hahahaha Wasnt it a great day??? I was quite happy as well when I got the mail from SUNY. I felt like I was already a member at FIT. Yeah, well, let&amp;#39;s see what happens with my score. I had 2 weeks to prepare myself for the test. I decided to pursue an international degree only 1 and 1/2 month ago. So, if I dont get in, I will persist hahaha Wish you best of luck on Saturday and I am sure you will do great.</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569648</link><pubDate>Tue, 24 Mar 2009 19:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:569648</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>4</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569648</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-569648.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi Flavia!! It was so nice to hear from you and that you replied so soon! Thank you for your help I really appreciate it! I will send my essay to FIT and hope to get accepted! I&amp;#39;m sure you are going to do well on your TOEFL score, as I can tell your english is doing more than fine! I&amp;#39;m having my test on saturday and I&amp;#39;m hoping I will do good. I already recieved my PIN and my Student Information Number and I must say I was soo thrilled when I got it...and yeah for Spring 2009 so don&amp;#39;t worry we WILL see each other haha So, again thank you for your reply and good luck!! Hope to see you soon!</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569549</link><pubDate>Tue, 24 Mar 2009 19:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:569549</guid><dc:creator>FlaviaLima</dc:creator><slash:comments>5</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569549</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-569549.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hola Yenia! Como estas? Thanks for the compliments on my essay... since I posted it here, I have changed a few things and did not mention my curriculum. I&amp;#39;m sending mine only to FIT. This is from the website:    IMPORTANT : FIT Admissions will not process your application until after the Academic History and Essay form has been submitted. The essay form is only available at fitnyc.edu. Have you received the Student Information Number and PIN from FIT? When and what are you applying for? Spring 2009? Hopefully we will see each other in class hahaha Well, after my TOEFL test I&amp;#39;m not counting on this... I&amp;#39;ll probably have to apply again. Let&amp;#39;s see, right? Good luck to both of us!!! Yeeiieee!!!</description></item><item><title>Re: Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569358</link><pubDate>Tue, 24 Mar 2009 19:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:569358</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><slash:comments>6</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm#569358</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-569358.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi! I am also working on my essay and I think that yours is going pretty well, the only suggestion I have is that I dont think you should mention your curriculum, you have to write about yourself and your personality...etc more than your background. But as I said, it looks pretty good. I have something to ask you too; u see Im from Mexico and I was also asked for my SUNY essay, but i dont know if you have to send your essay to them or to FIT only, or both... What did you do? I would really appreciate if you could explain that to me in detail beacuse I really really want to get accepted there. Hope to hear from you as soon as possible!! Thank you, Yenia</description></item><item><title>Please!! Help with autobiographical essay (FIT)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 24 May 2009 18:33:13 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:561205</guid><dc:creator>FlaviaLima</dc:creator><slash:comments>7</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseAutobiographicalEssay/gmdpb/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-561205.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Hi everyone, I am applying for admission to the Fashion Merchandising Management Program at Fashion Institute of Technology and need help with my essay. Would someone please give me suggestions? I&amp;#39;ve been reading some of the essays posted here and already gathered some ideas. You will certainly recognize them  SUNY autobiographical essay:   Flavia Aparecida Lima    Fashion Institute Technology    Admissions Essay    September 15, 2008        #1: I am Flavia Lima from Brazil and I am applying for admission to the Fashion Merchandising Management Program at Fashion Institute of Technology. Despite the fact that Import/Export Business is my main experience, Fashion has been part of my life since I was a child and I have always dreamed...</description></item></channel></rss>