http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htm#593461Sun, 22 Mar 2009 11:15:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:593461Bassim0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htm#593461http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-593461.xmlDear Fandorin. Thank you very much. Your help is much appreciated! By the way, when I wrote, "Nowadays they have become student dormitories." I meant the wards, of course. Maybe I should have been clearer and wrote from the beginning," Nowadays, the wards have become student dormitories."http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htm#593421Sun, 22 Mar 2009 11:15:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:593421Fandorin1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htm#593421http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-593421.xmlHi, Bassim. Welcome to EF. This is the second part of my text. WINTER There is a little house around forty meters to the right of the path. White smoke belches from its chimney, which wind drives above the trees towards the nearby woods. I have never seen people around but probably there is a family with children living there, because there are a swing in the garden and children bicycles leaned on the house wall, frozen and covered with a snow. I wonder how it feels to live so isolated, without neighbours and playmates? At least, one can scream and quarrel as much as one wants and never risk s disturbing one's neighbours. In the past this area was a huge mental hospital where thousands of mental...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htmFri, 22 May 2009 10:15:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:590417Bassim2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseWouldProofreadTextPart-Two/hbcqh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-590417.xmlThis is the second part of my text. WINTER There is a little house around forty meters to the right of the path. From its chimney belches white smoke which wind drives above the trees towards the nearby woods. I have never seen people around but probably their is a family with children living there because there is a swing in the garden and children bicycles leaned on the house wall, frozen and covered in snow. I wonder how it feels to live so isolated, without neighbours and playmates? At least one can scream and quarrel as much as one wants and never risk disturbing one's neighbours. In the past this area was a huge mental hospital where thousands of mental patients were kept behind the thick...