http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3614.32638)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htm#594632Sun, 24 May 2009 13:18:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:594632Bassim0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htm#594632http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-594632.xmlDear Julielai. Thank you very much for helping me with my short story and thank you for your time and effort. Best wishes.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htm#594554Sat, 24 Jan 2009 14:18:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:594554julielai1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htm#594554http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-594554.xmlOnce upon a time, there lived a dictator who had an absolute power . Like many dictators before him , had he could do in his country whatever pleased him. His every wish would be fulfilled, his all plans implemented without resistance. If he wanted a palace close to the sea it would be built and if he wanted a cottage in the mountains it did not take the builders more then (sp) a week and he would sit in a cosy living room with the open fireplace enjoying delicious food and wines.A specially invited quartet would play Mozart because he was the dictator's favourite composer. If he wanted to sleep with beautiful girls his assistants would go into the town, round up those who were beautiful and before they (who are they?) could...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htmFri, 24 Apr 2009 13:18:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:593545Bassim2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ATaleDictatorShortStoryPart-One/hbnnh/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-593545.xmlPlease, would you proofread the first part of my short story. A tale of a dictator Once upon a time, there lived a dictator who had an absolute power as many dictators before him had. He could do in his country whatever pleased him. His every wish would be fulfilled, his all plans implemented without resistance. If he wanted a palace close to the sea it would be built and if he wanted a cottage in the mountains it did not take the builders more then a week and he would sit in a cosy living room with the open fireplace enjoying delicious food and wines.A specially invited quartet would play Mozart because he was the dictator's favourite composer. If he wanted to sleep with beautiful girls his assistants...