http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598897Mon, 26 Jan 2009 00:38:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:598897AlpheccaStars0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598897http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-598897.xmlMajid: I have used Google translator too. Sometimes it is OK, and other times completely wrong. I only use it to get an idea.. I am happy to help you with your essay. Kind regards, A-Starshttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598441Thu, 26 Mar 2009 00:38:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:598441program21http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598441http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-598441.xmldear AlpheccaStars Thank you very much for your help.In fact, i used google translator websit in some sentences.i am still not  good in writing.i will make a new essay taking in my mind your advice. with best regards Majidhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598257Mon, 25 May 2009 23:38:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:598257AlpheccaStars2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htm#598257http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-598257.xmlProgram: You essay has many statements that are factually questionable, and many problems with grammar. It will help you a lot if you make a title (a topic that you will defend), list the main points you want to make on the topic, order the points logically, and then write a paragraph for each point. Example: Topic: Racial prejudice is a problem today, but will disappear in the future. 1) We have racial prejudice today because... 2) People do not socialize with people from other cultures today because.... a)... b).. c).. 3) The positive aspects of races not socializing with other races are ... 4) The positive aspects of races socializing with other races are. 5) (Conclusion) There are forces present today which will reduce prejudice......http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htmThu, 26 Mar 2009 00:38:36 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:598108program23http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectMyEssay/hcmjx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-598108.xml“Why do you think that many people do not socialize with those who have a different racial background than their own? Think about possible reasons for this phenomenon, and what sort of results keeping to one’s own racial group can have for society. Remember that there can be both positive and negative effects when races don’t mix.” For thousands or may be million years ago, people used to live in separate groups around the world. They didn’t have the communication technology as we already have it now, they have been lived in absolute different cultures.Now, after the human development, cultures start contact each other. Every being on this planet, whether fish, bird or mammal, has a preference for its own kind, and defends its...