http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3616.28671)http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htm#728360Wed, 13 May 2009 15:05:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:728360daisyreyesr0http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htm#728360http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-728360.xmlcan you delete all my essay say lost angeles needd it to be delete so could not let no body see to see ithttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htm#611663Thu, 26 Mar 2009 05:17:29 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:611663Grammar Geek1http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htm#611663http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-611663.xmlAt the very least, start EACH instance of dialogue with a new paragraph.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htmTue, 26 May 2009 04:17:29 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:611601daisyreyesr2http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectEssayAgainCheck-Okay/hzwvj/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-611601.xmlLost in L.A It was Friday afternoon and all I could think about is homecoming and reuniting with my friends. It had been two months since I last saw my best friend, Julie. We now live in Fontana and started a new a high school and quiet frankly I missing my friends and my old school. Ingrid said, “Daisy! What shirt do you think looks better the blue or the black one? “Um I don’t know try the blue one” Ingrid placed the shirt across her chest and stroke a pose “Oh no…no definitely try the black one” I replied. “Daisy and Ingrid come here” Ingrid and I rushed to my mom’s room laughing and giggling. “Daisy here’s my cell phone; make sure you call your father when you guys are ready to come home. Do not go anywhere else, once the...