http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.39139)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670325Thu, 12 Feb 2009 03:54:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670325Ahelaumakani0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670325http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670325.xmlThere are many reasons why a person should go to college, other than just receiving a college degree. Many people have their own beliefs about why a person should attend college but I will share my own views on why college is important. The reasons I feel are most important are that more job opportunities are available after receiving a degree, the atmosphere of college promotes socialization, and it improves intelligence. When a young person enters the world after high school things tend to change for them. They either go on to college or get a job. Either way they will eventually need to make an income. That’s when reality hits; they can end up working in a dead end job or finish college and start a career they'll love. The...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670185Wed, 11 Feb 2009 23:58:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670185Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670185http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670185.xmloringinally i am from mexico but i now live in wisconsinhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670103Wed, 11 Feb 2009 21:35:45 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670103Ahelaumakani2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#670103http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670103.xmlwhere are you from?http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#669660Wed, 11 Feb 2009 11:49:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:669660Anonymous3http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#669660http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-669660.xmlthe essay's for a high school classhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#669448Wed, 11 Feb 2009 05:34:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:669448Ahelaumakani4http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htm#669448http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-669448.xmlI can help you correct your essay but I was wondering where you are from and if the essay was for a class or an application or what. I ask because I would correct it to be a little more formal or not depending on what the essay is for.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htmWed, 11 Feb 2009 04:13:15 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:669411Anonymous5http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadMyEssay/wrvzc/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-669411.xmlThere are many reasons why a person should go to college, aside from receiving a college degree. Many people have their own personal beliefs about why a person should attend college but I will share my own views on why college is important. The reasons I feel are most important are job opportunities after receiving a degree, the atmosphere of college that promotes socialization, and to improve my intelligence. When a young person enters the world after high school things tend to change for them. They either go on to college or get a job. Either they got to do something to earn an income. That’s where reality hits, I end up working some crappy job or I finish college and start a career I’m going to love, and one kind of sounded better...