http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3715.30106)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htm#670843Thu, 16 Jul 2009 23:50:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670843Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htm#670843http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670843.xmlWow, that was such a quick reply! Thank you, rafaelinrio! So far it looks better, but any other suggestions (about form, structure, other ideas that should I include) are still appreciated.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htm#670770Sat, 16 May 2009 23:50:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670770rafaelinrio1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htm#670770http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670770.xmlHello, I am a student from Romania and I want to apply for a Master Degree in Computer Science at one of the Universities in Denmark. I understand that the motivation letter is crucially important, so I will appreciate if you take the time to give me some advice and suggest correction of grammar errors, style or structure of text. Thank you all! "To The Selection Committee: I am a Romanian student who graduated last summer with a Bachelor of Science in Computer Science. I want to dedicate the next two years of my life to studying for a Master Degree at your University. Having the possibility to do this in a foreign country and with your prestigious University, not only gives me the chance to get more knowledge, but also allows me...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htmSat, 16 May 2009 23:50:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:670692Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseReviewMotivationLetter/wrwmw/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-670692.xmlHello, I am a student from Romania and I want to apply for a Masters Degree in Computer Science at one of the Universities in Denmark. I understand that the motivation letter is crucially important, so I will appreciate if you take the time to give me some advice and suggest correction of grammar errors, style or structure of text. Thank you all! "To The Selection Committee: I am a Romanian student who graduated last summer with a Bachelor of Science in Computer Science. I want to dedicate the next two years of my life to studying for a Master Degree at your University. Having the possibility to do this in a foreign country and with your prestigious University, not only gives me the chance to get more knowledge, but also allows me...