http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htm#688265Wed, 18 Mar 2009 19:30:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:688265Anonymous0http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htm#688265http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-688265.xmlhey thanks!! Ill look into it :)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htm#688264Wed, 18 Mar 2009 19:27:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:688264rafaelinrio1http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htm#688264http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-688264.xmlHey, It's pretty good, but the thing is the use of the word THE MEDIA, some people use it in the singular and some people in the plural. Ok, I know that MEDIA is plural and the singular is MEDIUM but people use MEDIA as a singular collective noun many times, I myself use it in the singular. So, it'd be better for you to check it out. But I think both forms are gramatically correct in English. Hey guys my paper is on media and democracy, would appreciate any feedback ... THanks :) As technology in the 21st century continues to advance at incredible rates, the media will soon (if it doesn't already) surround us in every moment of our lives. But, do we ever stop to question the implications this may have on citizens and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htmWed, 18 Mar 2009 18:51:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:688242Anonymous2http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyIntroduction/wvbhx/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-688242.xmlHey guys my paper is on media and democracy, would appreciate any feedback ... THanks :) As technology in the 21st century continues to advance at incredible rates, media will soon (if it doesn’t already) surround us in every moment of our lives. But do we ever stop to question the implications this may have on citizens and the democratic system as a whole? Do we ever stop to ask what role the media plays in the bigger picture? Naturally we assume that the information age would be democracy’s best friend; however, I would like to question this widespread belief and ask if the media is preserving democracy or killing it slowly before our very eyes? Consequently, mass media and the effects it has on democracy will be the main topic...