http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayHavingChildrenOlder/wzzlr/post.htm#694401Sat, 04 Apr 2009 19:17:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:694401AlpheccaStars0http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayHavingChildrenOlder/wzzlr/post.htm#694401http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-694401.xmlI have made a few suggestions and underlined words where there is a mistake. Essay: The tendency of the last three or four decades is people having children at a fairly older age than they people used to. While some claim the humanity has become more mature and more likely to consider birth giving a great decision , others are rather alarmed. There has been a significant change in the way we live recently. Women do not have time for motherhood and marriage, being absorbed by a career planning and further education. The ideal family must have a number of home appliances, a car or even two, and future parents should have the most prestige jobs are possible. The first goal for all of us is a material success. There is no doubt...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayHavingChildrenOlder/wzzlr/post.htmSat, 04 Apr 2009 17:01:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:694365Anonymous1http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayHavingChildrenOlder/wzzlr/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-694365.xmlI don't demand for correction of the whole text! Correcting any part of it will make me happy enough :) Topic: why people have children older, why is this happening and what are the possible consequences of that for the family and the society. Essay: The tendency of the last three or four decades is having children in a fairly older age than people used to. While some claim the humanity has become more mature and more likely to consider birth giving a great decision, others are rather alarmed. There has been a significant change in the way we live recently. Women do not have time for motherhood and marriage, being absorbed by a career planning and further education. The ideal family must have a number of home appliances,...