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<?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="http://www.englishforums.com/utility/FeedStylesheets/rss.xsl" media="screen"?><rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Essay, Report &amp; Composition Writing</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>XMOD (Build: 3616.28671)</generator><item><title>Re: Would you be so kind to correct my essay? thank you</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectEssayThank-You/qmpx/post.htm#86390</link><pubDate>Thu, 26 Mar 2009 22:41:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:86390</guid><dc:creator>julielai</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectEssayThank-You/qmpx/post.htm#86390</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-86390.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>Just spotted a few things  learn a valuable *lesson *save time *at this point relaxes both their bodies and minds Minor tense inconsistencies  Just my 2 cents.</description></item><item><title>Would you be so kind to correct my essay? thank you</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectEssayThank-You/qmpx/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:41:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:82345</guid><dc:creator>eagertolearn</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCorrectEssayThank-You/qmpx/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-82345.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>I'm taking a course to become an English Teacher in Spain and I have to write a summary of all the lessons I attend during the course. Once I have all the summaries I'll have to hand them in to my teacher and I wouldn't like to have any grammar mistakes. Could you take a look and check everything is OK? thanks in advance. By the way, I haven't checked my punctuation so you will probably find many mistakes in this field. One more thing, I would be interested in knowing your opinions about the things said in the essay. Here you are:    CLASSROOM MANAGEMENT:  DEVELOPING SPEAKING ATTITUDES  	After spending a quarter of an hour in the class, I started thinking I had gone to the wrong building or maybe classroom. Everything was...</description></item></channel></rss>