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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>ESL Essay, Writing World</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EslEssayWritingWorld/Forum9.htm</link><description>Post your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment or just read for fun.</description><dc:language>en</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3260.39585)</generator><item><title>Re: Plzz tell me how to improve it...need help</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlzzTellImprove/brzkv/post.htm#85140</link><pubDate>Wed, 30 Mar 2005 15:33:07 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:85140</guid><dc:creator>the_mystic_dude</dc:creator><slash:comments>0</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlzzTellImprove/brzkv/post.htm#85140</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-85140.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>what's that supposed to be? a letter to your girlfriend? a dear john letter? a suicide letter? &lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Plzz tell me how to improve it...need help</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlzzTellImprove/brvxq/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 29 Mar 2005 19:58:36 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:84931</guid><dc:creator>broken heart</dc:creator><slash:comments>1</slash:comments><comments>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PlzzTellImprove/brvxq/post.htm</comments><wfw:commentRss>http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-84931.xml</wfw:commentRss><description>My heart...which i hate the most&lt;br /&gt;i wish you could die&lt;br /&gt;without you i wouldn't know the meaning of pain&lt;br /&gt;without you i would never be sad&lt;br /&gt;without you my cheeks would never know the taste of tears&lt;br /&gt;Heart go with  him...and leave me happy alone &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;---------------------------</description></item></channel></rss>