http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayReportCompositionWriting/Forum9.htmPost your essay, short story or composition here. Review, comment, or just read for fun.enXMOD (Build: 3615.29165)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCorrectGrammarThx/bcgdv/post.htm#95137Tue, 24 Feb 2009 19:03:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:95137xudzh0http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCorrectGrammarThx/bcgdv/post.htm#95137http://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-95137.xmlAh..the paragraphs didn't came up...that okhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCorrectGrammarThx/bcgdv/post.htmSun, 24 May 2009 18:03:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:95136xudzh1http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCorrectGrammarThx/bcgdv/post.htmhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/comments9-95136.xmlHi I'm new to USA and my grammar's bad. This is a 8th grade paper based on the reading of Tuesdays with morrie. If you can help me find some grammar errors i'll be very glad. Thx again. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A Refreshed Life “Look at my new car!” Everyday, we hear conversations of fascinating machines and new technologies. I am one of the zillions that have their mind soaked up with egotistical tasks. Rarely, if not never, does the word “death” come to our mind. It is a fear hidden inside us that we all try to avoid. Morrie, however, took death as a pleasure. Through the book of Tuesdays with Morrie, the ALS victim taught us about origin of fear and...