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Re: Grammar Check,Punctoation and structure of essay !!!

MaXmOuSe — Fri, 06 May 2005 19:54:01 GMT

thank you very much You really help me a lot of

Re: Grammar Check,Punctoation and structure of essay !!!

abbie1948 — Fri, 06 May 2005 15:37:22 GMT

Well done, maxmouse.

I completely agree with the statement that hatred can only breed hatred. From my own observation I conclude that hatred is something terrible. Problems and hatred go hand in hand, and I think that Hitler and Stalin are good examples of this. In my opinion these two men are products of hatred.

First of all, hatred is something relative. For instance, to me hatred is a bad feeling which can only be overcome with love, but it is different for others.On the one hand, each person is born without any drop of this horrible feeling but after many disgusting circumstances his/her soul becomes the home of evil.

On the other hand, sometimes hatred helps people to understand themsleves better than they could without it. I know people who get through such a situation by realising that love is a more beautiful feeling than hatred, and that everything goes wrong when the root of motivation is this evil.

Not only that, all evils are born from hatred, and people believe that hatred will destroy the world. The only solutiontothe problem is love. Furthermore, people are inclined to give hatred rather than than love because if their love is unrequited they will be disappointed.

In conclusion, I suggest to all the people in the world that they show love to each other and forget hatred.

Grammar Check,Punctoation and structure of essay !!!

MaXmOuSe — Fri, 06 May 2005 13:32:40 GMT

I completely agree with the statement that hatred can only bornhatred. As a result of my own experience I conclude that hatred is something terrible. Problems and hatred go hand in hand. The brightest example of my opinion is Hitler and Stalin.According to me these two men are fruids of hatred.
First of all, hatred is something relatively. For instance, to me hatred is a bad feeling which can only be overcomed with love, but for each other is different.On the one hand, each person is born without any drop of this horrible feeling but after many disgasting circumstances his/her soul becomes home of the evil.On the other hand, sometimes hatred helps people to understand themsleves more better than can do it without it. I know people who get through this situation if we can call that "situation" to realise that love is more beautiful feeling than hatred and everything goes wrong when the root of motivation is this evil.
Not only that, all the evils are born from hatred,but people believe that hatred will destroy the world.The only solution of the problem is love.Furthermore, people are penchant for giving hatred than love because if the love is not reqited they will be disappointed.
In conclusion, I will suggest all the people in the world to make love and to forget the hatred.

Re: Help me

abbie1948 — Thu, 05 May 2005 12:32:53 GMT

Hi maxmouse,

I'm sure you can think of lots of things "hatred only breeds hatred" - just think about the world, look on the internet etc.

When you have got some ideas, and written your essay, post it here and we'll try to help you with your English.

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MaXmOuSe — Mon, 02 May 2005 08:25:40 GMT

Somebody who can explain to me what to write in my essay on the topic - hatred can only breeds hatred! Nothing good,Nothin worthy, nothing creative can be born of hatred.