Okay this is a quick essay I wrote for English. I had to write how Gaston Leroux made the Phantom a likeable character. I had a bit of an issue writing on this and I know you can tell but the main thing I am worried about is the grammar and my

were completely gone would have been fine. had completely gone just underscores the idea that before the entire eight weeks of treatment finished, the cure was already evident. treatment: Week 1, 2, 3 .................8 used

I used to have light to moderate acne. After using the regimen for about 8 weeks, the spots had completely gone. Why not "were completely gone" instead? Thanks!

"Secondly, I wanted to live & work in Singapore for a long time and I would like to turn my dream into a reality. I hope you could help me on this opportunity." - this sounds like abit begging to me. Maybe can change it to something like

There are a few little errors but it's a bit long to go through the whole thing. As it is a word document, why don't you run a spell and grammar check on it, as this will pick them up. Go to tools, spelling and grammar.

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. Dear teacher, Say 'Dear Mrs. Smith', if you know her name I am writing this letter to let you know my daughter couldn't do her homework yesterday because our internet conection was down. Fortunately, it is fixed

Hello guys, I need you guys to help me fixing my teacher's letter. If you have a nice way to say it, I would appreciate it very much. Thanks in advance, Dear teacher, I am writting this letter to let you know the reason why my daughter can't able

Oh, Marius. I am sorry again for not providing context. Health is a numeric value in a computer game. It is mentioned in the text before those sentences about health. All the sentences are from the manual for an ancient Russian adventure game.

Remember that a long walk without rest leads to a quick loss of energy. (no comma). or: Remember, a long walk without rest leads to a quick loss of energy. (comma) or: Remember: a long walk without rest leads to a quick loss of

Hi all. Here are another three sentences which I think need a grammar check... «Having a rest takes a fourth of the day. The same time is spent during a walk from one location to another.» «Remember, that a long walk without