When I first came to the University of California, Davis, I was among hundreds of students whose future seemed unclear. Four years of high school, two years of middle school, and six years of elementary school did not help me decide what I

Dear forum I'm new here, finding this forum while searching for some paraphrases that are used in my Statement of Purpose (SoP), while applying for a PhD in Food Science. Then, I am lucky to find this forum, and I post my SoP here with the hope

Hello everybody, This is my sceond post on this great website. Nobody replied to my first post, and this is quite urgent. I just need someone to look over my motivation letter and give some feedback/tips/hints. I'm a South-African in the

This is my personal statement, wich I will send to 3 different universities. I'm not sure about the order in wich letter is written, nor of the grammar/spelling. Secondly, I don't know how to adress the people of the admissions commitee.

Hi Anon, I don't think you need to address the recipient of the letter at all if it's a personal statement. Referees typically write "To Whom It May Concern", but this might sound somewhat arrogant if written by the applicant himself/herself.

That's an understatement. Very thin. Your objective is too vague. what sort of industry do you want to work in - what sort of career goals do you have? Just 'a job in an English company' doesn't exactly tell anyone anything, does it. Valuable

I need your help!Thank you so much!

Thanks allot for correcting my statement. And about 'making it sound as though this is the only course you are interested in!' its difficult because I'm sending application through UCAS for six similar courses at different universities and I can

Dear Sir/ Madam I am a young Polish Musician/Producer currently living in Ireland. As a pianist I have a classical background but I am also passionate about contemporary electronic music of all genres (from experimental to so-called club music)

Hi again. I postet this as an anonymous because I thought that I'm logged in but I wasn't. I hope somebody will reply. Thanks again.