Hi, Phew, there is a lot to get hold of here! I think that mountainhiker's suggested structure will work very well for this letter and you have worked hard to make improvements to your original. I think you still need to plan your letter a

Hi Dung, You are making excellent progress. It is late afternoon, early evening here. I have some other things to do and then I am going to the gym this evening. But I will look at what you have written tomorrow. What you might want to do is

Let's keep this as our guide. I suggest the following: 1) Introduction (very quick points) 1a) Who you are 1b) What you want to do 1c) Why do you want to do it 1d) What do you want from them 2) Detailed background 2a) Expand on who

Thanks for your reply!I have just finished the first two paragraphs for your request.Can you help me to correct it,plz! Dung Here it is: Nguyen Thi Le Dung Dear Sir: (see if you can find the person’s name)

Hi Dung, There are requirements from Utrecht University to finish a motivation letter: - Why would u like to study at Utrecht University? 1b & 1c & 3 - What field(s) of studies do u find most interesting and why? 1b & 1c & 3 - Do u have any

Hi Dung, Your letter needs a lot of work. Are you in a hurry? If you are, you might need to ask some English speaking person nearby to give you a helping hand. If you are patient and are not in a hurry, then we can work through you letter here

Soufiane, Call it a letter, call it an essay. Either way, you will have only a few paragraphs and it will cover the same topics. While we are correcting this essay, why don't you revisit your other "motivation letter." Yes, I understand