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It was gusty as well as dreary-looking outside. The moon was shining over the quite street as well as some street lamps. I was talking on phone while I was taking an evening walk. In a while, I felt my hand was freezing. The leaves on the quite street were flying around. I heard the wind howling....

Hi, you know your writing is really improving, well done. When I went to a barbershop today, I wanted my hair cut only. As soon as I entered the door, someone welcomed me. I told her exactly what I wanted: short. She did not speak my dialect so we did not talk much. After my hair was cut, she...

When I went to a barbershop today, I wanted my hair cut only. As I immediately entered the door, someone welcomed me. I told her exactly what I wanted: short. She did not speak my dialect so we did not talk much. After my hair was cut, she wanted my hair wash. I was thinking she just washed away...

In later years his sickness had stricken him so he did not write any book. It was forbidden to have sex in this society. Jay and Judy's liaison would get more dangerous when they rented a room in the busy street. In a few week the police would find out. If they got caught, they would be killed....

Thank you very much Clive!

Hi, I asked him, "Do you always take the bus?" He replied, " Only when my wife is not using the car." Then he said, "My wife will give me the car back when it has a problem." He told me there was a secret passage in his house. What attracts you to men like me? A blue bird was perched on a...

I asked him, "Are you always taking the bus?" He replied, " Only when my wife is not using the car." Then he uttered, "My wife will give me the car back when it has troubles." He told me there was a secret passge in his house. What made you attract to men like me? A blue bird was perched...

Extreme Makeover: Home Edition is a (truly is a hollow adjective here) superb reality show that first aired on December 3, 2003. Each 60 minute episode features a team of designers, contractors and several hundred workers who must race against time: (you could subsititute the colon with a...

Jay and Judy were four feet apart when she fell down on her injured arm. She got her injury in the evening when she was practicing martial arts. Jay's room was small, clutter and smell. A cab driver with a friendly face drove Jay to the hotel. When Judy gave Jay a note " I love you", Jay...