What are these phrases that you are putting before the colons, Angli? The two I've seen so far make little sense. With an iPod in your hand, you can listen to it anywhere as soon you turn it on. With an iPod Touch in your hand, you can look at

Hi, Swint grabbed Herman by the hair atop his head so that Herman had no choice but to trot along with him while Swint ran down Main Street. The word 'atop' does not seem very natural to me. I suggest simply 'by the hair

hi, In 2010, the profit will rise to 200 pounds. In 2010 the profit will rise to 200 pounds. The profit will rise to 200 pounds, in 2010 The profit will rise to 200 pounds in 2010. any difference (in term of both grammar and meaning) between the

I like your dogs,they are so cute. Hi, mohzayat. This amounts to a "comma splice." It needs either a conjunction or a semicolon. I like your dogs because they are so cute. I like your dogs; they are so cute. Best wishes, - A. Edit.

Why do you think it is not a well written sentence?

Swint grabbed Herman by the hair atop his head so that Herman had no choice but to trot along with him while Swint ran down Main Street. Is the above sentence missing any punctuation? Should there be a comma after "head"?

I regret that you feel this way and take offensive on take offense at my comments. Among those who had helped you recently, I happened to be the most risky with my comments ?? unclear -- maybe "risk the most with my comments"? on your

The sentence looks fine to me with or without a comma. CB

Could someone please take a look at this instead of saying whatever it is you d ay repeatedly. I regret that you feel this way and take offensive on my comments. Among those who had helped you recently, I happened to be the most risky with

Could someone please take a look at this instead of saying whatever it is you day repeatedly. I don't find the sentences weird at least not these and for the punctuation and grammar, I personally don't see anything wrong with them. thanks