By Universities, Paragraphs

'Why both Sartre and Camus should have been so keenly aware of the absurd about the same time is one of those mysteries of the zeitgeist time spirit: that we are still far from solving. Camus always had a strongly lyrical feeling for the material world-sunlight, sea, sex- so that his...

Hi, MountainHiker! I am from China. I met this forum about two months ago and found you are very friendly. Now I want to apply for a PhD position, and I need your help. It would be very helpful. I would highly appreciate your suggestion! Thanks a lot!---By the way, I have registered, but not...

Hello Emilia,It seems you did a quite good job! I have highlighted several phrases that caught my eye. I hope they will be useful in your quest for a scholarship!Remember that you should use "Yours faithfully" instead of "Yours sincerely" if you do not know the name of the recipient. By the way,...

Thank you so much for the feedbacks. I have just reviewed the letter! Concerning the last sentences of the first paragraph, the point is that I am going to MGIMO Universtity, I haven't gone yet. That's why I wrote "studying at" instead of "having studied" and I would like to emphasise the...

Your leter is a bit long; hence, I have only corrected the first paragraph. With these comments in the back of your head, you should be able to improve the other paragraphs, too!There are some things that sound a bit strange to my ears. I have highlighted them. Please remember that you should not...

Hi I wasn't familiar with the word 'docent' so I looked it up and found "A docent or privat-docent was a recognised teacher at a German university who was not on the salaried staff. It was often a post held by a young mathematician working for his habilitation". Is that what you meant? Is docent...

Hello... I am studying English in level 2 at the university.This is my first narrative paragraph.Would you please check the ( spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, punctuation marks mistakes, and writing mistakes) ? ------------ The moment my cousin was hit by a car, I felt shocked. In my...

Hi, my name is Lucas, i would really appreciate, if you could help me correct my letter and "organise" its structure.I just started writing it - it's for a University in the Netherlands, quite a special one, where it's possible to study differentsubjects to get your Bachelor. I would like to...

chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> Your essay is clear in general. Yet you have to be careful about some points.>> First, try to paraphrase what you want to say if it's given by the topic. Don't use the exact wordings.>> It's good for you to have used different sentence structures in the...

Hi! Thanks again Savy! I rewrote some parts of the letter actually! I think the last letter didn't fit to the company I'm applying for! So could you check please...? And I'm not really sure about the third paragraph of this letter. I don't know how to link the fact that I enjoy much...