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Julielai wrote: A mad dog rushed into a giant dog as the giant dog used to do that. (what does that mean?) A mad dog was new to the family who owned an old giant dog and others. The old dog was jealous of the mad dog, which had great instinct of fighting and and was strong. Beside...

All of a sudden, the sky was dark as the wind was getting stronger. There was no one else in the street except me. I sent my girlfriend home after seeing the show. I never thought about her neighborhood much until then. I began getting scared when I was driving down. When the light was turning...

When the pill stuck (wording) in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and (parallel) bitter taste . It dissolved quickly when he drank some water. The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give...

It is the third longest river in the world. One third of the entire nation lives by this river, which is about 4,000 miles long. The scenery is spectaular there. The biggest dam, which will be finished by 2012, is to stop its flooding in many parts. The good thing about the dam is that it...

It was dreary-looking outside as rain was pouring down.The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool. I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming. I embraced my knees and put (rested?) my chin on them, and looking down into the water. As I was patiently...

When the pill stuck in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and bitter taste. It dissolved quickly when he drank some water. The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure. With...

Just a note on susiciously. I'd take it that the bum was suspicious of something, not that the 'I' felt suspicious about the bum. (lol writing that made me giggle it sounds hilarious, albeit juvenile, to me. bum has a different meaning in British English).

A bum dressed in torn clothes walked suspiciously into the grocery store. I did not lift my eyes to look at him when he came in. After he left the store, his smell hung in the air for a while. The years passed, and except for a few old people, most people forgot what the revolutionary...

A bum dressing in torn clothes walked suspiciously into a grocery store. I did not lift my eyes to look at him when he came in. After he left the store, his smell hung in the air for a while. The years passed, and, except for few old people, many people forgot what the revolutionary was. The...

It is the third longest river in the world. One third of the entire nation lives by this river, which is about 4,000 miles long. The scenery is spectaular there. The biggest dam, which will be finished by 2012, is to stop its flooding in many parts. The good thing about the dam is that it...