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Cut down the adjectives. Angrily, with anger in his eyes, with concern, etc etc. Show, don't tell. e.g. Dan flashed his bloodshot eyes at Ned (or something like that) The doors and the windows were closing and being locked carefully. Soon the town streets were left empty as they had been for *a...

Please help me with this essay. I'm still working at the conclusion High School versus College Peoples are born to learn through out our life. Sometimes we can be self teach but most of the time we need to go to school in other to learn. School plays a major role in all of us. Many of us will...

Hello, This is not a bad attempt and your English spelling is good. You just need to organise your thoughts a little better and tidy up the grammar. A few hints for you Paragraph one: ..whether their family or friends are the greatest influence on young adults. No need to repeat the 'greatest...

Thank you guys for your suggestions. This is my rewrite essay and I have some questions about it.This is a compare and contrast essay. My teacher said theres is two methods: One side at the time and Point by Point.I think I am using point by point. Do you think so? It is really confusing for me....

Just another quick comment. Overall, your English is very good. Your essay only requires very minor adjustments. So you just need to pay more careful attention to the tenses. And occasionally, a few words need to be changed here and there. But overall, your English is good.

OK my darlin’, I’ve done my very best in a short time. I’ve made a few tiny little changes to the vocabulary and just fiddled around (to stop myself getting’ bored late at night LOL). What I’m too tired to do is iron out the tenses throughout the essay. Don’t worry too much, it’s OK really. ...

As is my own personal tradition, I open the door quietly and walk onto the patio of my home. Outside is the familiar view of Commencement Bay, with bright red lights soaring above the islands and peninsulas of Puget Sound, forever blinking as a warning to the planes soaring overhead. I light my...

Grammar is the system and patterning by which language is organised. It is used to distinguish the "types" of words we use, such as the diferrence between verbs, nouns and prepositions, for example. It is also used to describe sentence structure and to classify the tenses of verbs, amongst...

Villa rivers Researchers have estimated a progression rate was 0 5 kilometres per 1000 years Clary 1984

I am face problem of actual rules of Tense. Please give a suggestion about this. I need to know the proces of free hand english essay writting. Khorshed