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I made a few revisions, can you look over this and see what you think, thanks. The Honorable Judge Nettles-Nickerson Judge of the 30th Judicial Circuit Court Dear Judge Nettles-Nickerson: The detrimental actions of Alex Hamil have caused a great amount of distress and have been...

A well-written letter. I just made a few cosmetic changes: The Honorable Judge Nettles-Nickerson: The detrimental actions of Alex Hamil have caused a great amount of distress and have been devastating to everyone involved. No amount of remorse, no matter how heartfelt, can excuse his...

The Honorable Judge Nettles-Nickerson: The detrimental actions of Alex Hamil have caused a great amount of distress and have been devastating to everyone involved. No amount of remorse, no matter how heartfelt, can excuse his actions. Despite the poor choices made by Mr. Hamil, I believe his...

My friend was recently involved in a drunk driving accident. I have to write a character letter for him. Here is what I have so far. The closing and intro are weak. Any help would be appreciated. I know my writing isn't that strong any way you can suggest to make it sound stronger would also...

You remind me of those who resorts to the number of hits on "Google searches" to prove that the "majority" accepts this but not that! Well, Temico, everybody has to know something of their own knowledge! Sometimes one just knows something without need to resort to google, however I can provide...

You remind me of those who resorts to the number of hits on "Google searches" to prove that the "majority" accepts this but not that! Well, Temico, everybody has to know something of their own knowledge! Sometimes one just knows something without need to resort to google, however I can provide...

1- I don't always go to the movies in the morning. 2- I always don't go to the movies in the morning. I think they are fine. I have a preferance to the first one, but number two is ok if I add commas before and after "always" to emphasize. Are they IN any WAY strange to your ears?...

1- I don't always go to the movies in the morning. 2- I always don't go to the movies in the morning. I think they are fine. I have a preferance to the first one, but number two is ok if I add commas before and after "always" to emphasize. Are they IN any WAY strange to your...

1- I don't always go to the movies in the morning. 2- I always don't go to the movies in the morning. I think they are fine. I have a preferance to the first one, but number two is ok if I add commas before and after "always" to emphasize. Are they any strange to your ears? Thanks,

Here's a short story I had written. I hope to get as many critiques as possible. And please let me know any mistakes I had made and any structuring of the language that sounds awkward. If you happened to notice a series of similar mistakes which I tend to make very often, please correct me as...