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I do hope that your teacher didn't give you that question as it gives me serious doubts about their English ability! You can't refer to people as 'it' for a start, and there are lots of other errors. You have a nice natural and fluent writing style. You just need to be a little more careful with...

Shaikhoon wrote: Freshmen composition is one of the English graded courses taught at gulf university for science and technology –GUST- .It is a very important class that all student at GUST must take since it teaches them the fundamentals of essay writing, enhances their skills of...

Thanks a lot. Do you think its correct to seperate these paragraphs the way that you have done so?, can you tell me which words contain capital letter. Isn't "Athlete" a noun, so it must be capitalised?

It's a bit long so I'll just comment on the first couple of paragraphs and then you can review the rest yourself if any patterns of problems emerge. You have lots of random capital letters - why do you capitalise athlete for example? There are other incorrect uses of capital letters as well. You...

Hello Agina, you are welcome to come here with your questions. To help you with your first post, remember that I is always capitalised and that the start of a new sentence is a capital letter. Hello everyone! i I am the a new member here. ('The' would mean that you are the one and only new...

Hi, I've gone through the first paragraph for you and highlighted problems in the rest. Your main difficulty seems to be the use of singular/plural, verb tenses and knowing when you need a determiner. There are other errors as well though. Once again, NO CAPITAL LETTER AFTER COMMAS! Nicely...

Hi Dante, This is interesting, thoughtful and honest writing. You need to put a capital letter after each period. Are you supposed to be writing this in correct grammar, where sentences have subject/verb/object? Instead, you have written a 'stream of thoughts' which are interesting but which...

Well, write your essays and come back for help with them. I'm afraid no-one is going to do them for you. We'll be happy to help polish them up though. As a first helpful hint; it would be a very good idea to spell the titles of the books correctly and use capital letters as names are proper nouns.

Makes a change from the Jungle Book and Canterville Ghost! Are you all in the same class in Malaysia? How come you are all posting your essays here all of a sudden? Has your tutor told you to? I'm just curious - can you explain the situation please? Anyway, your essay: 1) Check verb tenses - to...

Hi, This is nicely written overall. You need to remove all the random capital letters that are scattered throughout the essay and double check some of your possessives - customers' is required in one or two places. there hands - their hands.