The Office of Scholarships and Financial Aid rejected this essay of mine. I am so mad. Can you tell me what seems to be the problem? The only Instruction given aside from the format was to write an essay entitled 'Appreciation on the Benefits

jor February 9, 2009 　 As a student whose English is a second language, Agnieszka faces more challenges as a English writer. Lack of vocabulary, incorrect sentence structure, grammar mistakes, and incoherence are Agnieszka’s biggest weaknesses,

Hi could you please review this excercise? Thanks for your help :D Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and detail to support your answer.

I was still lazing in my bed on a sunny Saturday morning when I heard my sister screaming with excitement. My father had offered to take us to visit the zoo. Immediately, I jumped out of bed and started getting ready for my trip. We drove in my

I was very excited and not quite sure what to expect. The first zoo creature I met turned out to be an owl. He eyed me warily and I grinned back with a goofy smile. I turned and found myself face to face with an alligator. Unlike the owl, he was

Future Goals Everyone has a future, whether it is long or it is short but they have one, and what they end up doing with their future it will be their decision, but I have my own to worry about. I have to think about what I want to accomplish

By the way, do you consider those with less vocabulary poor in English grammar even if they can write perfect sentences based on the basic sentence-patterns? Aren't they allowed to write formal essays?

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Hi, dear friends, Below is my essay to Franklin&Marshall College, with the topic" what lead you to apply Franklin&Marshall College?" Please help me to point out the unclear points or any other problems. I'll appreciate your

Hello I want someone to check my research paper but I don't know how to put it here because it contains 6 pages. So should I copy it and past it here or what? Please help me. awtar