Please help, I have been working on this essay for three days straight and my teacher is very adamant about using commas and grammar correctly so can you please help I need this grade. Essay below: Normal 0 false false

Wow, this was a really powerful essay. As I read through your paper I was easily able to imagine you as a war general, making an inspirational speech before battle to his soldiers. Keep up with the strong creativity in your papers, it makes it

Hi Nik, Here are my thoughts. * It's difficult to read this (part of) essay. There are five characters: two women (roommates), a boyfriend, an advice-giving man ( "The man suggests" ), and a teller ( "I think that..." ).

But I think it's a little bit sneaky to avoid saying what something is, by simply calling it part of a complex structure. Advangi, No,no, there is no avoiding here. I am making this argument based on how I under the sentence and with

High school teachers and college professors have very little in common and they are different in many ways. In my experiences through high school and college I have notice many similarities and differences between my high school

Nouran: I will not comment on the content of your essay any more. I have done that in the past, and don't have anything more to add. This time I will only remark on grammar. Your punctuation needs more attention. I did not correct these

. Always leave one space after a comma, colon, semicolon or full stop. My friends often go to the gymnasium to work out, but I think differently from them. I go to work by bicycle every day , I take my daughter for a walk after supper , I do

Hi, 1.dash use: Would you say a comma is necessary here? Why anyone wouldn't put a comma here? Do you think a complex or compound sentence can be used after a situation like this involving a dash? Leave this on the board to act as an example

hi Rosamond! My essay was meant to be that way :D i mean i chose it to be informal so that i could be personal in my words and thereby truly expressing my appreciation for the scholarship. I think that this choice i made caused your impression on

Firstly , I think your essay is a bit "effusive " . secondly , perhaps you should have been more formal or "academic" in your writing , your essay looks as if directed at a friend not a scholarship providor ! ( e.g. 2 you , 2