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Hello teachers and helpers, I would appreciate if someone could proofread my essay because I think I have problem in shifting tense. I may so use the wrong tense for some of the sentences that I'm not aware. Please help me if you have time. Thank youElledanceworks Dance Company presented...

Hello.　I'm a Japanese man, and I am planning to study abroad. This is my first time to post my essay here. I would be most grateful if you could point out and correct errors of grammar, expression, logic, and so on, in my essay. I wrote this essay for TOEFL, so please take it into...

Hi there, Please help me to check grammar, expression, word choices and also the content of this essay. I found hard to develop the ideas when dealing with this topic. By the way, in your opinion, should a nation have the same natinonal curriculum for all their students? And why? Thank you...

Sorry, there's a problem with the former posted entry! There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with...

I have no ideas about the content or the organization of focused points. I just have some suggestions on word choices, expressions and grammar. The highlighted lines include possible problems and the red words are my suggestions to improve the writing. Hope that it'll be useful!There Is No...

- If I were you, I would express: "The most important effect is that illiteracy works as an inhibitor to the society" instead of "The most important effect of illiteracy on society is that it works as an inhibitor." - That is to say = In other words I wonder if "That is...

There Is No "Together" In Jerusalem For Jews and Muslims, Jerusalem has been a city of hope and loss. It has been their homeland but also their battlefield. Its history has been filled with great joy but also with tragedy. In Hebrew, the name "Jerusalem"...

Go away before I call the police. Go away or (else) I'll call the police.Neither of these would be found in a passage written in formal English. At least I can't imagine an essay, news article, or scientific paper that would contain the idea of threatening to call the police -- unless...

Hi - Got as far as I could with this - but only done very quickly - hope it's of some help

I. Cause/Effect essay Topic: Write an essay about how the internet affects the way people communicate with each otherInternet, in this high-tech era, has become more popular with people of all ages. It provides the whole community with a huge amount of communication as well as a great means of...