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Hello there. I hope that this helps - all the changes I have made are in bold, and any comments I have made are in italics. I hope that this helps! Latino immigrants coming to the United States have to face the issue of whether or not to assimilate. Understanding this issue is essential to...

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Dear Sir or Madam: Having completed my Bachelor’s degree programme of International Business, I am eager to apply for the postgraduate *basketweaving* programme of XXX at your university. I have been consistently applying my best efforts toward my studies. After graduating from the top...

Hi kk, My name is CHEN WANG-CHUN. I am a senior of ShihHsin University. I major in department of journalism. I am the youngest one in our family. My father is a labor who works in building. My mother runs a stall on a prosperous street. My elder brother works as a mechanic in plastic...

Dear Miriam, Yes. You are totally right at the very begining of your previous post. Any variants of one sentence will be annoying enough to send me to a mental house. The listings on Google are considered as for reference only. One should never buy all the the stories without any doubt in mind....

Hi, sameerameetra I am also a new user for english speaking. I am doing the study of English from last five months. In the starting of my studyI found my self weak in English,but asI am trying to learn English my confidence increased. Try to speak two to three times a day.Speak any...

Hi Aaron, After a quick look ,the way my teacher and essay books say that an essay has a structure . And topic sentences. The structures generally of an essay are: Introduction Body Conclusion You can look in google for "five paragraph essay"until I'll find you a specific good example. I think...

Last paragraph starts; In a word, definitely learning a language in the country of it's origination is more beneficial than being familiarized with it otherwise." Maybe replace 'word' with 'nutshell', or start that paragraph with 'To summarise ...

Hi Aaron, welcome to the forums: Here's an example of a 'briefly corrected' first paragraph: "English has become a global language, its becoming increasingly important to become familiar with it. There are two schools of thought, presenting different opinions, regarding the best way to study....