In Letter of motivation^x, Paragraphs^x

Hello,I am Richard, a Dutch undergraduate student applying for a Masters programme in London, England. As a part of the application form, I have to give 'further information' , which I interpreted as roughly analogous to a letter of motivation:"9. Further InformationPlease state your...

I am French, leaving in the US and need to prepare a CV and a letter of motivation for a position in the UK. In reading many posts on this (neat) forum, I noticed that there are many differences in the format of CVs for each country and I would like to make sure that what I read seems...

After Studying Physics at Technical University Dresden in Germany and Jomo Kenyatta University in Kenya for a total of four years I have decided to finish my studies with a Masters degree in the Netherlands. In the programme `Physical Sciences' offered jointly by the Universiteit van Amsterdam...

1. Run a spell-check. You seem to have problems with plurals as well, so work on that. 2. Re-write the first paragraph. The first sentence has you tying yourself in knots. Just state that you are writing to apply for the internship. The second sentence needs to take a different emphasis: why...

Firstly, you need to separate this into several paragraphs. Otherwise, I've made a few little changes for you in pink and have highlighted some areas I think you need to work on in blue. Quick points - Israel is not in Europe, possibility does not mean the same as opportunity. Good luck with your...

Just a couple of details: Your paragraph "AAU is known for ..." I don't think you need to tell them what they do! Especially not to explain their own terms to them "(PBL....)" Czech, not Check!

Hi I've added some initial comments in red. Sort out the structure and post up another draft for help with the final version. Why are you using a capital I for the word incentives throughout? I write to you to apply for the study course "International Tourism Management". I look at this study as...

hi i m huzefa 24 yrs of age from india would like help on my letter of motivation for my master in fashion management at paris heres the letter plz help Dear Sirs,Madam I huzefa katawala 23 yeas of age , having completed my masters in commerce and a diploma in fashion designing,...

Hi, I've only had a quick scan but I can give you a bit of help. Start 'I would like to apply....' 'Because it is the country which has the longest distance from Germany it gets quite clear that' this sounds a bit silly (no offense) as I don't think that distance really relates to degree of...

Hello, i want to apply to university and have to hand in a letter of motivation. I have been working on this first version for a while. I started with some brainstorming and wrote down all the things that interested me, what i have done before, what i want to achieve and also asked my friends to...