The Last Time I Cried The last time that I cried was the time when my husband deployed. It was extremely difficult to deal with because he means so much to me and we have only been married for four and half months. Even though we knew

hi , I have some questions please answer me when we use ( such as ) ? and when we write an essay what we write in the introductions ? and the support paragraph it's just discuss one things ( one Problem ) or many things in one paragraph ? and

Are you looking for someone to proofread this essay or are you trying to sell debt reduction services? If the latter, that's wholly inappropriate for this forum. If the former, please be a bit more clear in what you are looking for.

Hello reader~! Before you start reading, I want you to know that right now it's only three paragraphs that you will be reading. I just want a reassurance of my grammar and etc. I will update the rest tomorrow :D Thank you~! The Prompt- What

I might be wrong, but I'm afraid "Who has completed all the exercises" might be ok, and "Who has demolished such a beautiful cemetary" might not. I see that in Jim's and Amy's examples there always seems to be an

Hi, Here's a quick comment on your essay as a whole. Don't start each sentence in a paragraph on a separate line. Best wishes, Clive

In addition to Avangi's corrections, your essay wanders all over. If you want people to take the money they'd spend on gifts and donate it, say so. If you want people to focus on relationships instead of gifts, say that. If you're

Hi, Could somebody please check my grammar and pick out any mistakes that i very like make in below paragraphs please I have experiences working with older and disable person while I was working at (company) as a (role). I helped them put

Another essay to write for school.. >_< This is the topic which I chose - Nurse or trainer Paragraph one - support ( I need to write about trainer ) Paragraph two - support ( I need to write about trainer ) paragraph three- against ( I need

nomah, it's your essay, not ours. What are the reasons you believe separate education is better? Can you list three reasons? Write one paragraph about each of those reasons. Back up those reasons with studies or published opinions by