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I need to write 5 narrative paragraoh essay for my english class.could everyone help check my grammar and sentences..pls. point out any mistake that i make..i will really appreciate all the help..^^ A Memorable Childhood Experienceby: Nghia Vo Do you have a childhood...

Is the following text, excluding the text enclosed between +++'s, correct?This is the first paragraph from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jane_Eyre:+++Jane Eyre is an 1847 novel by Charlotte Brontë, published bySmith, Elder & Company, London. It is one of the most famous ofBritish novels....

Fixed a few things for you and highlighted a few for you to fix.

Anonymous wrote:Mr. Obama criticized frequently during the debate for what he said were distortions of his views and record by the former president. I think critisize A for NP is a correct structure, so he said means Obama said. If he said means Clinton said, for clause has a complete sentence...

Goodman wrote: Anonymous wrote: To Whom It May Concern: I have known *** since 2005 when he joined ***, an electronic project engieering firm. Mr. *** has been working under my supervision for two years. During this time, he has taken on several major projects with convincingly impressive...

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There are a few grammatical things, but I really question the entire direction of the piece. What makes you think that a college admissions official would be interested in accepting an acknowledged "bad boy" who doesn't care? I kept waiting to get to the part when something changed dramatically...

The paper is in MLA format and I had some trouble keeping it in present tense, block quoting a speech from poetry, and siting the poetry inside the paragraphs themselves help would be very very appreciated. sorry its so long. also I dont know if i like my closing statement, should I add more or...

The paragraph is: During the early 1980s when the hotel industry was growing at a healthy pace, traditional management contracts tended to meet the needs of both owners and operators. However, owners throughout the hotel industry had been agitating for more voice in how their properties were...