By Paragraphs, Yours sincerely

Erkoet wrote:Dear All, I am applying for a vacancy in another country, I worked for 3 months in that country before, now I want to move back there and start my future there, i just want to achieve the goal of getting my idea over, i revised my letter a couple of times and showed it to some...

Hi, I've made some changes. Perhaps you could explain your love of acting in more detail for one paragraph (I love it / I only feel alive when I act / I'd do it even if they didn't pay me etc.) Then explain your parents' objections in more detail in another paragraph. What about the...

Can you help me with my English task? I have to weite a semiformal letter to this subject: You contact a previous teacher about your choice of career. Your heart is set on theatrical studies but your parents disapprove of this choice for various reasons. Ask for his/hers advice. (2-3...

Hi ADELS, Welcome to the Forum. I've done my best. I wish you good luck with this. Clive Dear Sir/Madam: I suggest that you add a first paragraph to sumarize the situation. eg My recent application for UK permanent residency was recently rejected because of my IELTS scores....

Hi again, In Canad,a I think it would be relatively easy to get an interview in order to discuss this matter. Consequently, I'd probably remove the two paragraphs that describe your daughter. However, it sounds like, in Hong Kong, you have to write an impressive letter to obtain an interview. If...

Hello Nona the brit, Thank you for your reply. Here is my motivation letter. Could you please take a look? There are 2 questions that I have to answer 1. Why do you want to join the course? 2. Would you like to be considered for entry into the foundation year or the second year? I have a...

Firstly, you need to separate this into several paragraphs. Otherwise, I've made a few little changes for you in pink and have highlighted some areas I think you need to work on in blue. Quick points - Israel is not in Europe, possibility does not mean the same as opportunity. Good luck with your...

Hi, I've started you off and corrected the first three paragraphs. I have highlighted the errors in the remainder for you to have a go at fixing. Good luck with your application. I am writing to apply for the Medical Sales Representative vacancy as advertised in ABC newspaper, Nr.2 (642) on 20...

Hi, MountainHiker! I am from China. I met this forum about two months ago and found you are very friendly. Now I want to apply for a PhD position, and I need your help. It would be very helpful. I would highly appreciate your suggestion! Thanks a lot!---By the way, I have registered, but not...

Hello Emilia,It seems you did a quite good job! I have highlighted several phrases that caught my eye. I hope they will be useful in your quest for a scholarship!Remember that you should use "Yours faithfully" instead of "Yours sincerely" if you do not know the name of the recipient. By the way,...