hey all, if it is possible for you. please help me to correctthis paragraph. thanks "In our society, responsibility for growing up children is one of the most important factors of making a healthy and steady community. As well as having a

To whom i t this may concern: I was contact ed by email about your chat moderator position and was asked to explain why I think I would be a good moderator. First of all, when I hear the word moderator, I think of the word pressure. I can only

Hi, Start by writing your top 3 reasons, each in a separate paragraph beginnng with I want to be accepted into this program because . . . Then write a paragraph that starts with I want to study at XXX University because . . .

Initially, I was little perplexed about the social message they want to convey this time. After digging little more, it was clear, they want to change the lazy lifestyle of Indian people who gained extra flabs, who always complain that they do not

Well, you've made a good start on it; you seem to be an expert.

Hi, Sorry, but this is no better than before. No educated English speaker would write a letter like this with just one paragraph. And no university would bother to read it. They'd just throw it in the garbage. Do you care about

Yes, something like that, Newguest. The paragraph itself tells you what it means. It refers to a lack or cessation of holding and carrying a baby, and thus also the deprivation of physical contact.

Hi, Are you asking us to do your homework for you? Clive

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Hi, It's up to you, but most letters of this kind have more than one paragraph. You yourself wrote two. Your first paragraph begins by focusing on your past history, instead of on your present and future. In your second, you