my teacher made correction symbols on my ps. but I don't know how to correct these mistakes for sure. run-on sentence: 1.Now with an enthusiasm to to teach people who aim to achieve high proficiency of English the priceless wealth of

Hi nilabh: Of course the letter is your own creation, and you have to write it as you see best. Our comments are a challenge and opportunity for you to consider it carefully. It is not meant as an affront to you. We have reviewed hundreds of

Hi I have written this as a concluding statement to my Personal statement. I have cited examples of challenges and opportunities in th eparagraphs. In totality this senetnce makes sense to me. However just to add I can put it like :- One thing

Hi, It is not part of my resume it is part of my personal statement where I have to explain my attributes. I just dont need to write jargons but even need to explain it in simple words

excellent, excellent essay! i agree with the other poster's edits/comments. additionally, i would suggest also working a little on the intro. it begins slightly confusing as to what is happening. possibly change your first reference to the

excellent essay. i dont think you need to change a thing, except i agree with the other poster's addition to the second paragraph. otherwise, very solid, genuine and personal essay. great job.

Hi. Can you please correct my personal statement for medical school. Thank you for your time and consideration. Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE

Dear all, i had written a personal statement for an graduate school application. Can one of you can proof-reading the letter? I would be grateful for that. Here it comes: " Dear Thesis-Committee, I hereby wish to state my interest for a place

Hi. Below is my personal statement for medical school. Please help correct it or provide comments :). Thank you for your time and consideration. __ "No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" I heartily protested as my grandma tried to

Below is a sentence included in a personal statement I am writing or grad school. I can't figure out how to structure the bolded area. Do I place a comma there (I'm worried that this sentence has too many commas already), should I use the