By Punctuation, Paragraphs

"The Change of the Characteristics in the passage from The Hours" The passage from the novel The Hours by Michael Cunningham is intriguing. The passage illustrates the difference between the character's characteristics in different time settings: past and present. This difference is...

Anon, hi. A few things: This is not a sentence - it's a rambling collection of disjointed thoughts. If I am going to be perfectly honest, you have not put enough thought into this to justify our time in "fixing" it. A sentence ends with a period. You don't use ... to connect loosely related...

May you correct this paragraph with punctuation the subject of this paragraph is about the "How to filing the nails for the classic guitar". The filing of nail: 1- In the first process use either diamond dust or sandpaper num 400 The process of the nail : Put your nail of the index finger...

Hi, Where you have put semi-colons, I'd usually use commas. I have also suggested some other changes to your punctuation. My general advice is not to get into the habit of using semi-colons and colons. They can often make tyour meaning more obscure rather than more clear. You seem to have a...

I don't think you read the last correction at all. I am only going to highlight errors. It's up to you to fix them. Our work here is done. You have changed things that you should not have. You now have tenses all over - past in one place, present in another. You seem to have removed spaces...

Excuse my butting in, but I got onto this site while wondering about "much" and "fewer", and I thought I'd throw in my expert opinion. Firstly, having read all the preceding posts and to save your valuable time, "many fewer" is correct and "much fewer" is wrong. That's grammar for you. What...

I like the tone of your essay. You have some punctuation issues, and I think you either need to 1)focus on one definition of "tight" and tie it to a theme or 2) have an overarching theme that covers all these definitions. Perhaps your generation has been through all sorts of "tightness" and...

Analyse the formality of the article in SCMP It is indispensable for us to use an appropriate style when writing. There is no doubt that formal style should be practiced for newspaper as objectivity and impersonality are important. South China Morning Post is one of the most prevalent...

Hi all, I am a student from New Zealand studying Measure for Measure by Shakesphere and we have to write a formal essay going beyond the text. Here is the question Context/setting: This activity may be used as an extension to the study of a text. Students will develop an essay...

Love_suicide wrote:hi can anyone correct my writing and if you could add some idea to the paragraph to make it look better... Burglary One day after school. Please use a smaller size of type.#1 A full stop is followed by one space. The next sentence begins...