Hi, Today, my mind cannot recall how we gradually became closer to each other; only I can surprise to think for her greatness. The part in bold does not make sense. You need to say it in some other way. Best wishes, Clive Thanks Clive for your

Hi all could you please help me analyze the following pair of sentences: He heard Sheila coming back . He heard Sheila come back . What sentence/phrase elements are the words in bold? I guess 'coming back' is a clause. Is it a postmodifier

pls check the following sentence. i want to know that it is using for only conservation or writing the letter. and then which is more polite to say? " Days went by, i didnt do anything yet till now" " days went by , I couldnt

The incident (raid) comes about 11 hours after they ordered the party to close down its office, which was reopened on 17 November, after the government had withdrawn a ban on political activities. Are there any mistakes in the above sentence? Any

I know this is big, but please try as much as you can help me. Thanks. Unemployment and inflation are two well-known topics that are often discussed. However, many people do not know that unemployment and inflation have strong influence on each

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Hello: Nothing is technically wrong with your sentences, but your passage would read better as: "How are celebrity moms able to look so good just a few months after childbirth? Flipping through the tabloids, mothers who aren't famous