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Hi, Can someone please please go through the essay and make sure that sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for inconsistencies??? Why I want to pursue B.S. in Telecommunication. I am lucky to have been born with...

Hi,I am applying for BBA-Finance in a university. They have asked me to write an essay on why I want to pursue the program. I've written it, but I feel that it doesn't sparkle. I am not sure if grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood and tense are presented in a manner that makes...

Hi, I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Hi I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Well, my paper is due in about 3 and half hours! I haven't time to cite my sources, but I need to you guys to read my paper so I can change my sentence structure and style or I would have a bad grade on this paper. Don't worry about grammer! Here is my almost finished paper and please help me...

Leolyy wrote: hi Goodman, it seems that you feel it not easy to alter and modify the paragraph of my test essay. even though you have written a new one in addition, you have not modified on it. why? i cant understand because i think that it is easier to alter than to re-create. the only reason...

If I want to describe an essay or a prose with many difficult words and complex sentence structures by which the writer mean to impress the readers and show how literary he can write, what words I can use? Is "too contrived" able to convey my meaning?

Can you guys please edit the sentence structure, grammar and/or the information in this essay? Please and thank you! Three symbols from the novel, The Lord of the Flies by William Golding, which have a titanic amount of significance to the story include Jack, Piggy, and the lord of the flies. ...

Well time to apply to college, the application has to be in by January first and Ive talked to my english teacher about my Essay... I am in AP enlgish but when my Teacher went over the essay with me it was in a hurry so I didnt quite get all the he was saying. I know there are some sentence...

Hi forumites, I came to the US only seven years ago and I still have a little difficulty in grammar, word choice, sentence structure and such. I know my writing ability is not strong. So, please help me in give me some inputs/criticisms/editing/w.e on what you guys think and feel the...