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Please edit my paragraph where mistakes are. My classmate My classmate's name is Apiwat Ruensukrudee his nick name is Art. He comes from Bangkok. He is single and lives with his parents. He is a Buddhism. He lives in Ladprao 5 years. He is study English 16 years. He is study English...

Since this is an autobiography, wouldn't it be better to write it in the first person rather than in the third person? I would write it like this: "I was born in the city of Shiraz, Iran in 1954. I began my academic studies in the United Kingdom (U.K.) at Dudley Technical College. I...

Hi all! I have written this to the best of my ability. I'm pretty secure about the language part, as I'm bilingual, but it's the culture part that I want to check works. Some stuff I need to put in there, like the reason for the GPA - it's part letter, part appeal. But, this is...

Your letter is just fine. There are only a very few edits. Dear Sir or Madam, -- Do you not have the name of the person you should address this to?I am writing this letter to recommend is a well-disciplined, industrious student with a pleasant personality. He has always been a very open and...

At least two dozen schools, including Brown University, the University of Pennsylvania, Oberlin College, Clark University and the California Institute of Technology, allow some or all students to share a room with anyone they choose, including someone of the opposite sex. This spring, as students...

Probably your cover letter would first make clear what program you are interested in and how you found out about it. That could be one paragraph. A second paragraph could explain your experience and knowledge and why you think you would make a good representative for your university. A third...

It seems quite normatl that a sentence extracted from a long paragraph is difficult to understand. Sorry for this confusion.There should be no comma after "people who are able" because the object of the verbe "require" is "people". For your clarification, in the...

hi every one I'm new herI had wrote paragraph about Importance of EnglishI need someone edit my paragraph plz.thank you friends sadnessNo one denies the importance of English language in the present time as global language. It is clear that the English language has become more dominant around...

Hello everyone, nice forum you have here. I have a research paper due tomorrow and I have always had problems with punctuation and mechanics. I was wondering if anyone would be so kind as to proofread it. Also, I have a works cited list, but I dont know where exactly to put the citations if...

Hi Anon, I kind of waited to see if your letter had enough appeal to draw some interest before I give my two cents. I think in general, your letter is easily understood. However, I find it a bit wordy and the tone was rather stiff. I didn’t want to go through the whole letter but I did mark...