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Howdy, could someone please take a look at this e-mail and tell me if it is grammatically correct. Thanks a ton.----------------------------------------------------------------------Hello, My name is David and I am one of your engineering applicants. It has come to my attension quite a few...

Hi, nice letter overall, you've stated your case very well. I've made corrections for you highlighted in blue, and added comments and highlighted in pink other problem areas you need to re-write or clarify. Dear Mr. -----, I graduated from Kiev National University of Construction and...

Leolyy wrote: hi Goodman, it seems that you feel it not easy to alter and modify the paragraph of my test essay. even though you have written a new one in addition, you have not modified on it. why? i cant understand because i think that it is easier to alter than to re-create. the only reason...

chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> Your essay is clear in general. Yet you have to be careful about some points.>> First, try to paraphrase what you want to say if it's given by the topic. Don't use the exact wordings.>> It's good for you to have used different sentence structures in the...

INTRODUCTION chemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />> > Professional writing is the most challenging task for the inexperienced student. Above all academic requirements it still ranks top of the list in day to day campus stressors. On average, eighty five percent of the requirements are based...

yohooo8, Your letter likely won't work well. Your letter seems to be asking for help as opposed to saying what you can do for them. Rather than discussing all the adversities and how hard it has been, turn those adversities into strengths. I came to the US at teh age of 15, and since then I...

This is my rencent cover letter. Dear Recruiter / hiring maneger I would like to sincerely ask you to provide me an opportunity in your company where my skills and knowledge can be use and expend. I was born in China and grown up in China. I came here when I was 15 years old without speaking a...

Bunny, I have gone through your essay and made some comments. It looks scattered to me. Not well thought out. I have also started a second iteration. You need to decide which one you want to work with and make the essay flow smoother. You are about to graduate from university in a business...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the Engineering program (Diplome d'Ingenieur)at a member institution of N+I. I graduated in Automation with a bachelor degree in 2003 from the university of Science and Technology. My study focuses on Control Theory, Distributed and Process Control....

Easy! Just write something and post it here. Someone will help you correct it. For example: "Hello, everyone. My name is Ann. I've just graduated from university and am hunting for a job now. Someone said that my oral English is quite good, but my written English is vefy poor. I dont know...