In Yours sincerely^x, Application letters^x

Hi, ich muss einen application letter für ein Stipendium von der Universität schreiben. Könnt ihr bitte das Schreiben mal durchlesen und mal eure Meinung dazu sagen? Thanks, Jasmin As I already had the "*** experience" during my study abroad from May to August 2005, I would like to do my...

Very nicely done, actually-- just a couple of cosmetic changes. The date and everything else is now seen more commonly against the left margin. Good luck getting your son into this school. Martha and Koti Ramas Debonstr. 45 80454 Munchen St. Paul´s...

Hello, sorry for causing this inconvenience. I hope the text is easier to edit now. Thanks very much for your efforts Martha Martha and Koti Ramas Debonstr. 45 80454 Munchen St. Paul´s School Administrative Department Klauserstr. 4 80434 Munchen ...

Dear forum members, We would like to enroll our son in an English nursery school - admission is very difficult (at this age!!). Though we belive our English is acceptable for normal communication, we are not too sure about formal letter writing. We appreciate any corrections/tips/help. Thank...

Vincent, To answer 1) I would write 'She enjoys all activities inside and outside kindergarten INCLUDING common academic lessons, ballet dancing, violin lessons, PICNICS WITH HER CLASSMATES, SCHOOL EXCURSIONS, and many other activities.' or 'She enjoys all activities inside and outside...

Vincent, I have corrected any grammatical errors, and reworked certain phrases so they read 'easier' in English. The first thing I picked up on was that you often switch between "we" and "my." You are writing the letter as a couple yet refer to your daughter as only "yours." This makes it...

Dear all, Please help to give me an advice and correction. Thank you. Regards, Vincent ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- My address Date Mr. Wong (The Headmaster) School name and school address Dear Mr. Wong: We would like to apply for...

Some further comments to nona the brit's comments. My address Date Mr. Wong (The Headmaster) Shcool name and School address Dear Mr. Wong: We would like to apply for admission for my daughter to your school in 2005. My daughter’s name is Kitty Yim and she is studying in primary 6 at ABC...

Here is my draft. I really don't know how to write it and what contain should be included. Please give me an advice. Thank you. ------------------------ My address Date Mr. Wong (The Headmaster) Shcool name and School address Dear Mr. Wong, We would like to apply for admission for my daughter...