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Mr M: You are choosing one interpretation; I have chosen two. JTT: That's my point, Mr M. You have given an interpretation that, I'm afraid to say, just doesn't square with reality. Mr M: A little while ago, he went to the lease renewal office to renew his lease. The clerk told him then that he...

Hi Vujin, You have made some good points but your main problem is confusion between the verb tenses. To look at the first two paragraphs in more detail for you The Huntsman is written by a first time writer, Whitney Terrell. The novel scenes are in Kansas City, back when racism wre was still...

There are not too many problems really. You need to organise your thoughts a little better and think about where each paragraph (I think you need more than two) and sentence should start and finish. You also need to check that your use of tense is consistant. First paragraph for you: A monk...

Hello everyboby: I really need someone's assistance! I posted a question yesterday and MrP helped me with that. However, I posted a final question, which is very important for me but regrettably he was no longer online. Would you please help me? I appreciate any assistance from you guys. I...

Hello MrP: Thank you very much for your attention! It is correct that this note will accompany the revised article that I am sending back to the Editor. Is that correct if I use the present perfect tense in the last setence as well, instead of the future tense? I will send him the revised...

Thanks for your answer. Finally, I can send the paper till Monday-Tuesday (end of the month). I have some more doubts. Here they are: 1) “We say that the causal principle of the Skeptical is the hope of becoming unperturbed. For men of talent, perturbed by the anomaly in things and being in...

It is said that a man wears the pants in the family. This means that the man is the head of the house. However, looking closer at Shakespeare’s play, this image varies during the hole1 play. Macbeth might be the man, but it is his wife which stays behind 2their deeds. Nevertheless, she also...

Hi Adonis, What you have written and asked us to check is an essay, not a title. The title is the subject heading for your essay so in this case it could be Problem Solving as an aid to learning English. Your essay needs a bit of careful checking and you need to make sure that you are using...

Hi, Please leave spaces between your paragraphs, some white space. A Far-fetched Pepsi Ad The first thing that hit us as we exited the plane was the oppressive, heavy heat - over 56°C. The considerable heat jumped down on to our shoulders and slowed our pace, and we knew we weren’t in...

My professor corrected some grammar on paragraph 1-4 but there still plenty in 1-7 paragraph need more correction. here is some comment my professor wrote. *in paragraph 1-4 he said i have sentence structure problem. *The paragraph has a focus but sentense problem interfere. *fragment on...