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Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading university. I have always endeavored to do my best and learn as much as possible. In 2001 after my graduation...

Dear Mr. Moutain Hiker, Thank you very much for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some changes, especially the paragraph 4(something about my families) and the last sentence of the second last paragraph(something about my future plan). Could you please take a look? I am...

Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. I will be graduating with BA degree in International Business from Vaasa Polytechnic University in May 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading...

Dear Mr. MountainHiker Thank you very much again for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some modifications. Could you please take a look again? Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph two is about what I have learned in previous university regarding other aspects,...

Dear Mr. Mountain Hiker At first thank you very very much for your time and suggestions. I have learned a lot from that and made some modifications. Could you please help me to check it? 1.I don’t know the name of the person that I write to. 2.Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph...

Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to...

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply to the “Medical and Pharmaceutical Biotechnology” programme. Ever since I was a child I envisioned becoming a scientist. My parents supported and furthered my curiosity by enabling me to attend chemistry, microbiology, botany and microscopic...

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply to the “Medical and Pharmaceutical Biotechnology” programme. Ever since I was a child I envisioned becoming a scientist. My parents supported and furthered my curiosity by enabling me to attend various I’ve made a lot of changes. See if this is...

Dear MountainHiker: hope to be safe and sound. I tried to make it better. Please review it one more time and tell me what is your idea specially about the last paragraph: I have a strong...does it cover what the university asked to:what you expect from your studies at XXX? Thank you so very...

Manager of LLM Program (I doubt it is a manager. You need to check the title.) Faculty of Law XXX University January 10th, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to apply for the LLM (I would not use an abbrevation here. I tend use abbreviations sparingly.) programme. After the...