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Yes, I read Catcher in school, but I don't think that proofreading this requires a knowledge of the story: 'A couple of days after the carousel rides, Holden got sick. Daddy and Mommy wouldn't let me see him, and I started to really miss him. It was funny: he was right next door and all, but...

Hi, I will provide some cursory comments. MountainHiker Dear Ms. Kim Balchin: I am writing to apply for a position of architectural assistant at your office. I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration. Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have...

Hi my friend Pitak is looking for a job in architecture right now. He is not very computer-literated so he asked me to post the massage for him. He would like to know if his cover letter for a job application is substantial enough to be distinguished from other candidates? See below. Please help...

I am proofreading something for my church and the phrase "...to spread the good news throughout St. Dunstan’s neighborhoods..." is in one of the printed materials. This doesn't look right to me, because the name of the church is already a possessive. Is that the correct punctuation for a double...

WonderPow, We aim to please. I urge to you to use caution when using my comments. My comments have my bias. Your school and your faculty might be different. Also, your prof's bias's might be directly opposite of mine. As I wrote earlier, you write extremely well, so I don't think you...

Gosh...you are really quick. Mr. MountainHiker. Thank you very much for your precious pieces of advice. I will keep trying to improve.

WonderPow, Nothing could better depict the new terrorist threat than the attacks on 9/11. The incidents marked the start of a new era in international peace and security, in which people feel that the world is no longer a safe place and demand that authorities take action. Some political...

Hello. I am a Thai student doing a degree in International Peace and Security in England. Can someone please please help proefread this introduction of my essay. It seems that there is going to be a lot of hard work for me this academic year since English is not my first language. Thank you in...

Can someone pleas proofread my essay? The subject was a learning experience. Thanks, also if you can think of a better title please share. MOD SAYS; Dear guest, thanks for your post, but it is unlikely that your post will be proofread as you have not registered and the essay is very long....

Hi Sheena, Welcome to English Forums. I don't know how much access you have to learning materials in Kurdistan these days, but many guides to taking TOEFL have been published, so that's what you should find first. For my own students, I recommend first and foremost that they take practice...