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When the pill stuck (wording) in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and (parallel) bitter taste . It dissolved quickly when he drank some water. The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give...

It is the third longest river in the world. One third of the entire nation lives by this river, which is about 4,000 miles long. The scenery is spectaular there. The biggest dam, which will be finished by 2012, is to stop its flooding in many parts. The good thing about the dam is that it...

It was dreary-looking outside as rain was pouring down.The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool. I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming. I embraced my knees and put (rested?) my chin on them, and looking down into the water. As I was patiently...

Hi, Is this a JUPAS essay? The content is okay. Some problems with grammar and wording. I've highlighted the parts that you need to fix. To be a business woman has long been my dream. It (Do not use pronoun here) not only helps me to develop a logical and analytical mind, but also...

I'm no Clive, but I hope this helps. Four Tamanasri youths, Kulon Progo regency (what is this?) were arrested Tuesday by police after allegedly (they are not convicted yet) torching their neighboring resident’s house during ( article) clash between youths from separated villages. One...

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Water is important for life. Some of the water is used for washing, some for cooking, the rest for other uses. If your brother's well is empty, give him some water, even if you are reluctant. Giving him water will reduce your water supply only a little. Don't be stingy with your water. Giving a...

Water is important SOURCE for life. Some of the water is used for washing, cooking and otherS.

Water Water is important for life. Some of the water is used for washing, another is used for cooking, and the other is used for anything else. If your brother’s well is empty, give him some water. Give some water to him. If you feel reluctant, give him little water. Come on, only a little...

a fast pass: __ means I erased a word --------------- Yesterday, I read some articles from BBC news about the life in Iraq. I was surprised to find that I had several misconceptions about Iraq. Firs t, t hey are not poor. They are rich. They have almost everything we have. They...