Lotus,
You still need to tighten your outline. To be facetious (humorous or funny), I could rewrite your outline as:
Paragraphs: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10
-> I am Brazilian
-> I am European
-> blah blah blah
-> blah blah blah
-> blah blah blah
-> blah blah blah
-> blah blah...