By Capital letters, Essays

Nicely written over all, sorry I can't help you with what they have made you realise! Parts you need to work on Proper nouns such as names always have a capital letter. The parts that are not quite right are 'offered us the idea', 'Armel, a twin' (you can't have just one, whose twin is he? Are...

Hi Centralita, I'm not qualified to respond to all of your interests here, but I will take it as far as my knowledge allows. I hope others more knowledgeable will join in. Some general observations: 1. Titles of research projects, conferences, and published articles, should include capital...

Hi, im 15 years old and recently sat my end of year exams, the thing is, my grades in my coursework are letting me down, and its all because of silly mistakes such as capital letters and paragraphs. I'm working at a level D, but the mistakes made are dragging me down to a level D which is...

Beijing? Who knows? Perhaps one day... Thank you very much for the invitation! I've read your posts about your essay, and I think it's being taken care of now. I can write my own essays, but my style is perhaps a bit too "free" for what you'll be asked to do in school/college. As I said,...

OK, MR mountainhiker,i am preparing for the writing essay of TOEFL test designed by ETS(from USA) and there only remains 20 days to the test date.here are 2 structures i often use in my essay:1.stands for the first structure.2.stands for the second one 1st Form the first paragraph: it goes...

Well, first of all, in your message, 1) The word (pronoun) "i" is always capitalized. 2) The word "because" not capitalized. 3) The first word of a sentence is always capitalized. I would ask whether the test was also supposed to cover capitalization. For instance, if the teacher had also...

Nawal, It is clear that your essay is informal,firstly because the use of the first pronoun such as 'I', secondly the use of the word in 'my opinion'.That some of the things that distinguish between formal and informal writing.Formal writing is more persuasive in acadimic writing. Some...