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Hi i need your help in my first critical essay . I dont know how to conclude the essay also I think that I need to add more in the introduction (theseis statement) but I dont know what to write and do u have any suggestions for a good title for this essay . and this is the essay : ...

Hi, Ali. This is a really nice essay, and I know exactly what you mean about perfumes! You need a little atTention to your grammar, word order and tenses, so let's try and help out. You have used the present continuous for a lot. (the 'ing' form). When we write a story, it is usual to use the...

Take a look at this essay of mine. Tell your opinions about it. It Happens in a Perfume Store My sense of smelling is happening to be ruined whenever I come in a perfume store. Unwillingly I sniff deals of scents and thus my nose aches. Unlike in the case of cutting onion, however, my eyes are...

Hi MrPedantic, I'm back! I've completed my revision essay. I changed my audience--so all paper. Original version of essay, my instructor's comments, and the final version are below. I would greatly appreciate any feedback. I know it is very long--and sorry about it. So, I don't mind if you think...

Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to simplify...

Dear sir or madam I have just completed my personal statement, or motivationa letter for applying for a Ma Programme in Marketing at a university in UK. I am anxious about it as the high admission requirements by the school. Could you please check it for me, please? Yours faithfully, maggiewong...

Hi, I started reading quickly and found a few errors. But I only got half way through. Unfortunately this stuff doesn't interest me and we don't provide a proof reading service. You seem to have a strong command of English, so I think you should do well. Let it sit for a couple of days then...

Whenever something bothers me, I write about it. Aside from working part time and putting myself through school, my interests primarily involve freelance writing and the completion of my memoir. I have submitted several articles and opinion pages to print and on-line magazines, local newspapers...

Hi MountainHiker, I made a few changes...what do u think ? Personal Statement1000 word limit ESSAY A - Autobiographical Essay: Give us your best writing. Tell us about yourself. You can include information on your family, significant persons, places and events in your life, what interests you,...

Pinknails, Please Post:46522 and 56402 Also, please don't carpet bomb the forum with your requests to have your letter examined. One request is sufficient. Several requests is impolite. We Canadians are usually more polite. You had attached your essay to the end of another thread. I took...