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Dear Jim, Where is this paragraph taken from? And is the following your explanation of the text ? The bad condition of his eyes came about suddenly; he was not expecting it.When blindness comes, it will be as if someone shut him up in the dark. (No one is really going to shut him up in the...

Hi, MountainHiker! I am from China. I met this forum about two months ago and found you are very friendly. Now I want to apply for a PhD position, and I need your help. It would be very helpful. I would highly appreciate your suggestion! Thanks a lot!---By the way, I have registered, but not...

Many thanks for your suggestions, which certainly improve my paragraph on the dispute over abortion. I have some other doubts. Hope it’s not a “pain in the ass” (I suppose so. will edit this). There is no rush, of course. 1) “I shall begin by briefly presenting Annas’ interpretation of the local...

Hello Sextus As it's quite a long paragraph, I've put some suggestions in square brackets. The sq. brackets replace the text in curly brackets. The paragraph breaks are merely for ease of reading, and aren't supposed to be suggestions. Let me know if these edits change your meaning: 9) “{To...

Hi Reviver , This is sounding really good. There are a few expressions which we might not use exactly as you have, but I think that is absolutely as it should be. After all, you don't want to send a letter in perfect English, as even most English people don't do that! And it has your own style...

In the following paragraph, what are the action/linking verbs? Any help would be appreciated! The Philadelphia Eagles quarterback has had his share of injuries, including a broken ankle that kept him out of six games in 2002. Coming back from his injury is never easy. A football player can...