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Hey, thanks for the speedy reply. The full paragraph that she has written is this ... According to Barry, Feminist Criticism could be described as the examination of representations of women in literature by men and women. Barry also describes feminism as being just the opposite of...

To the editor, I would like to thank Erin Texiera for the piece on the women of the civil rights movement, which showed appreciation to those who fought for their deserved rights though their actions. I especially enjoyed the paragraph on Frannie Lou Hamer from Mississippi.Nevertheless, I feel...

Thank you so much, Mr. Micawber. But what if we are unable to identify the quote author's gender? Could I just use "he" for all of them? hehe Mr. Micawber wrote: I find that students write better, stronger and clearer essays if they choose one side or the other to support, rather than...

Hi Jeff, Your first paragraph is rather attractive already. I would make an effort to discover the quote author's gender, in order to avoid the 'he/she' awkwardness. Here are some other words or phrases that need work: speaker (I'd change to 'writer' since it is not obviously from a...

"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society." The speaker claims that the destiny of society is determined by how children are socialized today, however, we haven’t...

http://pinker.wjh.harvard.edu/articles/media/1994_01_24_thenewrepublic.html Probably no "grammatical error" has received as much scorn as "misuse" of pronoun case inside conjunctions (phrases with two parts joined by is an object that requires object case, it does not mean that is an object...

Hello, Silver Moon! Nice to meet you. Welcome to this forum. I'm a Japanese guy and I want to help you. However, I am a bit confused. I agree that women in Japan are not treated equal and that the law for equality on both sides of the gender is just a scapegoat for politics in Japan which is...

Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the master’s programme in International Humanitarian Action. I will highlight my relevant knowledge, skills, and experience that qualify me for admission to your programme. Upon graduation, I will return to the not-for-profit sector as a health professional...

hank you veru much. I am not sure all the sentences are right others. General Notes: 1) Overall good. 2) You need to work on proof reading your work for missing words. It is a problem that I have too. 3) You need to be consistent in your paragraphs. It you are talking about what a...

Hi, I was wondering if someone would be able to proof read my short essay that is due on Monday. Any help would be appreciated. I am pretty condifent about the words I have chosen, but I have a difficult time with punctuations. The requirements were 1 page summary essay with 3 sentences for the...