By IELTS, Paragraphs

advice (no s) Try not to start every paragraph with regarding this, taking a look at that. Since the invention of computers in mid fifties, people *have been divided into *tow categories. The first one finds *it (explain it) interesting and helpful to their daily activities, You also tend to...

Hi Thank you very much indeed for the comments. I personnaly agree totally with you for not including my conclusion in the first paragraph, however, I read in one IELTS trainning book that the first paragraph (the introduction) should summarise the overall idea of the essay, including the...

Hi, a few quick pointers for you; Work out a logical structure for your essay. Don't put your conclusion in the first paragraph. Can you find any hard facts or references to add weight to what you are saying - for example, how do you know most people who do not like technology are over 50? ...

What was the topic? In most countries disabled people are not catered for adequeately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organisations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be taken to assist...