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Thanks for your help Julielai: Can you or anyone that's willing to help read it and tell me if it is OK? I made some changes to my essay Does it have any grammar or spelling error? If you think that my essay lacks something please notify me to inprove it. If you worked for the admission's...

Just the glaring errors. Comment: for a moment I thought you were going to talk about your father's death too. As I stared at the blank word processor screen on my computer, trying to write this essay, a thought came to my mind. That thought was: how much my life has changed in the past four...

Hi! I was trying to write my admission essay, but I am not a good writer... so It would be great if somebody could check my spelling and grammar.... because I really need to send a good essay to the university to get accepted... Thanks you in advance Natalia...

Hi, My comments are that your essay wanders too much. Or in other words, your essay needs a tighter focus. Your grammar is actually pretty good. It’s your organization of your essay where you need to apply the most attention. Try making an outline: 1) Love is a four letter word. 2) There...

Writing is not one of my strong area i'm really bad at grammar can some please proofread this for me. THank you in advance i'll appriciate your help Love is the four letter words that all of us have experienced before we could walk and throughout our life. Our love towards other can be express...

By the way - a note on having another teacher look at my essay and/or working with a tutor: Neither will be successful because - 1 - One of my classmate's dad is a retired English teacher. He has helped her extensively with her essay and the best she can pull down is a "C+" on her essays so...

*grin* Flattery will get you everywhere. Thanks for the compliments. You are correct - my opening paragraph is extremely casual. Purpose for it? To be different from the norm. The instructor really doesn't care too much about the actual substance of the essay - his main emphasis (according to...

Hi everyone, Thank you for having me at this valuble site.This is the first time I use a forum in my life.I thought before that I like to talk to people that I can see.So you can imagine that I don't like to use the phone either.I like human interaction and this site provides that and improve...